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Does faith pay?

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She was quiet, kind and pure
He was sick there was no cure
She was faithful; said her prayers
She believed that God really cared
She was left tormented and helpless
destroyed and alone; grieved with stress
but there was nothing she could do
and her skies were no longer blue
Where does she go from here?
her new problem was her fear
life just sucks; its totally unfair
And about God?hes not even there.
Constructive critcism is requested.
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ShaeShaddered's avatar
Beautiful and sad, and the picture a suits it so well.
I love this poem, though, I do believe God cares,
but personal opinion is everything and it doesn't stop me from loving this poem and image.
brilliant I must say :heart: